Some readability fixes

content/articles/2025-02-08-sflow-3.md

@@ -38,10 +38,10 @@ and is homed on the sFlow.org website [[ref](https://sflow.org/sflow_version_5.t
 Switching ASIC in the dataplane (seen at the bottom of the diagram to the left) is asked to copy
 1-in-N packets to local sFlow Agent.
 
-**Samples**: The agent will copy the first N bytes (typically 128) of the packet into a sample. As
+**Sampling**: The agent will copy the first N bytes (typically 128) of the packet into a sample. As
-the ASIC knows which interface the packet was received on, the `inIfIndex` will be added. After the
+the ASIC knows which interface the packet was received on, the `inIfIndex` will be added. After a
-egress port(s) are found in an L2 FIB, or a next hop (and port) is found after a routing decision,
+routing decision is made, the nexthop and its L2 address and interface become known. The ASIC might
-the ASIC can annotate the sample with this `outIfIndex` and `DstMAC` metadata as well.
+annotate the sample with this `outIfIndex` and `DstMAC` metadata as well.
 
 **Drop Monitoring**: There's one rather clever insight that sFlow gives: what if the packet _was
 not_ routed or switched, but rather discarded?  For this, sFlow is able to describe the reason for
@@ -53,27 +53,28 @@ to overstate how important it is to have this so-called _drop monitoring_, as op
 hours and hours figuring out _why_ packets are lost their network or datacenter switching fabric.
 
 **Metadata**: The agent may have other metadata as well, such as which prefix was the source and
-destination of the packet, what additional RIB information do we have (AS path, BGP communities, and
+destination of the packet, what additional RIB information is available (AS path, BGP communities,
-so on).  This may be added to the sample record as well.
+and so on).  This may be added to the sample record as well.
 
-**Counters**: Since we're doing sampling of 1:N packets, we can estimate total traffic in a
+**Counters**: Since sFlow is sampling 1:N packets, the system can estimate total traffic in a
 reasonably accurate way. Peter and Sonia wrote a succint
 [[paper](https://sflow.org/packetSamplingBasics/)] about the math, so I won't get into that here.
-Mostly because I am but a software engineer, not a statistician... :) However, I will say this: if we
+Mostly because I am but a software engineer, not a statistician... :) However, I will say this: if a
-sample a fraction of the traffic but know how many bytes and packets we saw in total, we can provide
+fraction of the traffic is sampled but the _Agent_ knows how many bytes and packets were forwarded
-an overview with a quantifiable accuracy. This is why the Agent will periodically get the interface
+in total, it can provide an overview with a quantifiable accuracy. This is why the _Agent_ will
-counters from the ASIC.
+periodically get the interface counters from the ASIC.
 
-**Collector**: One or more samples can be concatenated into UDP messages that go from the Agent to a
+**Collector**: One or more samples can be concatenated into UDP messages that go from the _sFlow
-central _sFlow Collector_. The heavy lifting in analysis is done upstream from the switch or router,
+Agent_ to a central _sFlow Collector_. The heavy lifting in analysis is done upstream from the
-which is great for performance.  Many thousands or even tens of thousands of agents can forward
+switch or router, which is great for performance.  Many thousands or even tens of thousands of
-their samples and interface counters to a single central collector, which in turn can be used to
+agents can forward their samples and interface counters to a single central collector, which in turn
-draw up a near real time picture of the state of traffic through even the largest of ISP networks or
+can be used to draw up a near real time picture of the state of traffic through even the largest of
-datacenter switch fabrics.
+ISP networks or datacenter switch fabrics.
 
-In sFlow parlance [[VPP](https://fd.io/)] and its companion `hsflowd` is an _Agent_ (it sends the
+In sFlow parlance [[VPP](https://fd.io/)] and its companion
-UDP packets over the network), and for example the commandline tool `sflowtool` could be a
+[[hsflowd](https://github.com/sflow/host-sflow)] together form an _Agent_ (it sends the UDP packets
-_Collector_ (it receives the UDP packets).
+over the network), and for example the commandline tool `sflowtool` could be a _Collector_ (it
+receives the UDP packets).
 
 ## Recap: sFlow in VPP
 
@@ -81,13 +82,12 @@ First, I have some pretty good news to report - our work on this plugin was
 [[merged](https://gerrit.fd.io/r/c/vpp/+/41680)] and will be included in the VPP 25.02 release in a
 few weeks! Last weekend, I gave a lightning talk at
 [[FOSDEM](https://fosdem.org/2025/schedule/event/fosdem-2025-4196-vpp-monitoring-100gbps-with-sflow/)]
-and caught up with a lot of community members and network- and software engineers. I had a great
+in Brussels, Belgium, and caught up with a lot of community members and network- and software
-time.
+engineers. I had a great time.
 
-in the dataplane low, we get both high performance, and a smaller probability of bugs causing harm.
+In trying to keep the amount of code as small as possible, and therefor the probability of bugs that
-And I do like simple implementations, as they tend to cause less _SIGSEGVs_. The architecture of the
+might impact VPP's dataplane stability low, the architecture of the end to end solution consists of
-end to end solution consists of three distinct parts, each with their own risk and performance
+three distinct parts, each with their own risk and performance profile:
-profile:
 
 {{< image float="left" src="/assets/sflow/sflow-vpp-overview.png" alt="sFlow VPP Overview" width="18em" >}}
 
@@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ get their fair share of samples into the Agent's hands.
 processing time _away_ from the dataplane. This _sflow-process_ does two things. Firstly, it
 consumes samples from the per-worker FIFO queues (both forwarded packets in green, and dropped ones
 in red). Secondly, it keeps track of time and every few seconds (20 by default, but this is
-configurable), it'll grab all interface counters from those interfaces for which we have sFlow
+configurable), it'll grab all interface counters from those interfaces for which I have sFlow
 turned on. VPP produces _Netlink_ messages and sends them to the kernel.
 
 **host-sflow**: The third component is external to VPP: `hsflowd` subscribes to the _Netlink_
@@ -132,7 +132,7 @@ turns on sampling at a given rate on physical devices, also known as _hardware-i
 the open source component [[host-sflow](https://github.com/sflow/host-sflow/releases)] can be
 configured as of release v2.11-5 [[ref](https://github.com/sflow/host-sflow/tree/v2.1.11-5)].
 
-I can configure VPP in three ways:
+I will show how to configure VPP in three ways:
 
 ***1. VPP Configuration via CLI***
 
@@ -148,22 +148,26 @@ vpp0-0# sflow enable GigabitEthernet10/0/3
 ```
 
 The first three commands set the global defaults - in my case I'm going to be sampling at 1:100
-which is unusually high frequency. A production setup may take 1:<linkspeed-in-megabits> so for a
+which is unusually high frequency. A production setup may take 1-in-_linkspeed-in-megabits_ so for a
 1Gbps device 1:1'000 is appropriate. For 100GE, something between 1:10'000 and 1:100'000 is more
-appropriate. The second command sets the interface stats polling interval. The default is to gather
+appropriate, depending on link load. The second command sets the interface stats polling interval.
-these statistics every 20 seconds, but I set it to 10s here. Then, I instruct the plugin how many
+The default is to gather these statistics every 20 seconds, but I set it to 10s here.
-bytes of the sampled ethernet frame should be taken. Common values are 64 and 128. I want enough
+
-data to see the headers, like MPLS label(s), Dot1Q tag(s), IP header and TCP/UDP/ICMP header, but
+Next, I instruct the plugin how many bytes of the sampled ethernet frame should be taken. Common
-the contents of the payload are rarely interesting for statistics purposes. Finally, I can turn on
+values are 64 and 128. I want enough data to see the headers, like MPLS label(s), Dot1Q tag(s), IP
-the sFlow plugin on an interface with the `sflow enable-disable` CLI. In VPP, an idiomatic way to
+header and TCP/UDP/ICMP header, but the contents of the payload are rarely interesting for
-turn on and off things is to have an enabler/disabler. It feels a bit clunky maybe to write `sflow
+statistics purposes.
-enable $iface disable` but it makes more logical sends if you parse that as "enable-disable" with
+
-the default being the "enable" operation, and the alternate being the "disable" operation.
+Finally, I can turn on the sFlow plugin on an interface with the `sflow enable-disable` CLI. In VPP,
+an idiomatic way to turn on and off things is to have an enabler/disabler. It feels a bit clunky
+maybe to write `sflow enable $iface disable` but it makes more logical sends if you parse that as
+"enable-disable" with the default being the "enable" operation, and the alternate being the
+"disable" operation.
 
 ***2. VPP Configuration via API***
 
-I wrote a few API calls for the most common operations. Here's a snippet that shows the same calls
+I implemented a few API calls for the most common operations. Here's a snippet that shows the same
-as from the CLI above, but in Python APIs:
+calls as from the CLI above, but using these Python API calls:
 
 ```python
 from vpp_papi import VPPApiClient, VPPApiJSONFiles
@@ -209,13 +213,14 @@ This short program toys around a bit with the sFlow API. I first set the samplin
 the current value. Then I set the polling interval to 10s and retrieve the current value again.
 Finally, I set the header bytes to 128, and retrieve the value again. 
 
-Adding and removing interfaces shows the idiom I mentioned before - the API being an
+Enabling and disabling sFlow on interfaces shows the idiom I mentioned before - the API being an
-`enable_disable()` call of sorts, and typically taking a flag if the operator wants to enable (the
+`enable_disable()` call of sorts, and typically taking a boolean argument if the operator wants to
-default), or disable sFlow on the interface. Getting the list of enabled interfaces can be done with
+enable (the default), or disable sFlow on the interface. Getting the list of enabled interfaces can
-the `sflow_interface_dump()` call, which returns a list of `sflow_interface_details` messages.
+be done with the `sflow_interface_dump()` call, which returns a list of `sflow_interface_details`
+messages.
 
-I wrote an article showing the Python API and how it works in a fair amount of detail in a
+I demonstrated VPP's Python API and how it works in a fair amount of detail in a [[previous
-[[previous article]({{< ref 2024-01-27-vpp-papi >}})], in case this type of stuff interests you.
+article]({{< ref 2024-01-27-vpp-papi >}})], in case this type of stuff interests you.
 
 ***3. VPPCfg YAML Configuration***
 
@@ -667,9 +672,9 @@ booyah!
 
 One question I get a lot about this plugin is: what is the performance impact when using
 sFlow? I spent a considerable amount of time tinkering with this, and together with Neil bringing
-the plugin to what we both agree is the most efficient use of CPU. We could go a bit further, but
+the plugin to what we both agree is the most efficient use of CPU. We could have gone a bit further,
-that would require somewhat intrusive changes to VPP's internals and as _North of the Border_ would
+but that would require somewhat intrusive changes to VPP's internals and as _North of the Border_
-say: what we have isn't just good, it's good enough!
+(and the Simpsons!) would say: what we have isn't just good, it's good enough!
 
 I've built a small testbed based on two Dell R730 machines. On the left, I have a Debian machine
 running Cisco T-Rex using four quad-tengig network cards, the classic Intel i710-DA4. On the right,
@@ -754,7 +759,7 @@ hippo# mpls local-label add 21 eos via 100.64.4.0 TenGigabitEthernet130/0/0 out-
 ```
 
 Here, the MPLS configuration implements a simple P-router, where incoming MPLS packets with label 16
-will be sent back to T-Rex on Te3/0/1 to the specified IPv4 nexthop (for which we already know the
+will be sent back to T-Rex on Te3/0/1 to the specified IPv4 nexthop (for which I already know the
 MAC address), and with label 16 removed and new label 17 imposed, in other words a SWAP operation.
 
 ***3. L2XC***
@@ -812,7 +817,7 @@ know that MPLS is a little bit more expensive computationally than IPv4, and tha
 total capacity is 10.11Mpps when sFlow is turned off.
 
 **Overhead**: If I turn on sFLow on the interface, VPP will insert the _sflow-node_ into the
-dataplane graph between `device-input` and `ethernet-input`. It means that the sFlow node will see
+forwarding graph between `device-input` and `ethernet-input`. It means that the sFlow node will see
 _every single_ packet, and it will have to move all of these into the next node, which costs about
 9.5 CPU cycles per packet.  The regression on L2XC is 3.8% but I have to note that VPP was not CPU
 bound on the L2XC so it used some CPU cycles which were still available, before regressing