readability fixes and puns

content/blog/wk10day5.md

@@ -12,9 +12,9 @@ late, as I have had a fabulous sleep that ended only at 11:00 or so. Tim and Mar
 hanging out and chatting. The nice thing about getting up at 11am is that I can immediately think of
 what to eat for lunch. Winner!
 
-I have most of the ingredients for a noodle soup, but we happen to have stolen my mushrooms, wo off
-to the _Denner_ I go, of course I commandeer Tim to go with me. He obliges and we grab the shopping
-list. There's only one thing on it that we can't find. We find a whole assortment of beans, but
+I have most of the ingredients for a noodle soup, but we happen to have stolen my mushrooms, so off
+to the _Denner_ I go. Of course I commandeer Tim to go with me. He obliges and we grab the shopping
+list. There's only one thing on it that we can't find: we find a whole assortment of beans, but
 there not being black beans, I find, is somewhat racialist of _Denner_. So, we buy everything but
 that.
 
@@ -36,16 +36,16 @@ Tim pretty quickly tempts me with small side quests, but I tell him to knock it
 IPv4/IPv6 addresses will be assigned _after_ Tuesday is written. Shut up, and let me write!
 
 Tuesday is quickly written and pictures annotated. In the meanwhile, the good news arrives that
-Tim's better half is enjoying the writing. Thanks for that! So I quickly assign Tim his FrysIX
+Tim's better half is enjoying the writing. Thanks for that! I quickly assign Tim his FrysIX
 addresses as a treat, and move on to [[Wednesday]({{< ref wk10day3.md >}})] and [[Thursday]({{< ref
 wk10day4.md >}})].  In the mean time, Tim rummages a little bit on his fancy
-[[AS214380.net](https://as214380.net/)] website and we listen to liquid Drum and Base all over the
+[[AS214380.net](https://as214380.net/)] website and we listen to liquid Drum and Bass all over the
 place. Marina at some point comes to ask if Tim is already going crazy with my choice of music. Ha!
-Joke's on her, it's **his music**!
+Joke's on her, it's **his choice in music**!
 
 Tonight we'll be eating some home made pita and kebap. Marina is already Marina-ting the meat (I
 apologize, but Dad jokers gotta Dad-joke) and I yeet some milk, herbs, yeast and flour into a
-pot and mixed/kneeded it together for a flatbread, which will be ready to bake at around 18:30.
+pot and mix/kneed it together for a flatbread, which will be ready to bake at around 18:30.
 
 Evening quickly arrives, but before dinner, we still have an important task. We drive over to _Glatt
 Zentrum_, walk straight past the LEGO store this time, and get some gifts for the home front. While
@@ -55,8 +55,8 @@ dude slides a good two meters on his noggin - it's really cool to see!
 The gifts in hand, we make our way back home to prepare dinner. Having something as simple as kebap
 with flat bread really does float my boat. It was super tasty and well seasoned. I can tell that Tim
 enjoyed it, because he finished out the whole pan. Happy times, because when I make the flatbread
-normally a few pita's are left over because there's only three on our household. Balance was brought
-to our input/output food chain.
+normally a few units are left over because there's only three in our household, which is a pita
+(ba-dum-tish). Balance was brought to our input/output food chain.
 
 After dinner, we also receive a treat! Tim has brought _Luxemburgerli_ from a place called
 [[Spr&uuml;ngli](https://spruengli.ch/)], so we sample a few while drinking our evening coffee. We
@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ also read and reply to a bunch of e-mail, and find one cool thread from Neil McK
 community. I boot up the LAB but it'll be on Brad's patio tomorrow, that I do these last loadtests.
 
 Tomorrow, I get to practice _Heatonism_ with Brad and I intend to as well bring a sizable _Limousin_
-steak. Brad has hiked _Kungsleden_ in Sweden this year and will have lots of stories to tell.
+steak. Brad has hiked _Kungsleden_ in Sweden this Summer and will have lots of stories to tell.
 Myself, I have lots to catch up on with him as well and tell him all about my sabbatical, which is
 the best thing I've done this year, by far.
 

hugo.yaml

@@ -23,6 +23,7 @@ params:
     twitter: "IPngNetworks"
     linkedin: "pimvanpelt"
     instagram: "IPngNetworks"
+    rss: true
 
 taxonomies:
   year: "year"